Kia Ora Aryan. I like the way you explained why you should not share anything on this google drawing, maybe you could add your house address on your private information if you do have the time to put it on. Is this feedback helpful or do you feel you need more?
Hi Aryan I really like the way that you put all that information into something that can help people learn you could add examples but you did really well so far great work.
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this is a really good poster
ReplyDeletenext time could you add some more information and pictures.
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ReplyDeletehi Aryan I like the way you think next time put more pictures on
ReplyDeleteThanks Tevita but I think I have enough pictures to describe the text.
DeleteKia Ora Aryan. I like the way you explained why you should not share anything on this google drawing, maybe you could add your house address on your private information if you do have the time to put it on. Is this feedback helpful or do you feel you need more?
ReplyDeleteThanks Miguel!
DeleteHi Aryan I really like the way that you put all that information into something that can help people learn you could add examples but you did really well so far great work.
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