Can He Save Her Writing! (Spider-Man)

In Writing we all had a task to write about a story that was about Spider-Man saving a girl falling, I wrote 5 paragraphs.

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My Poster About Kereru!

Last week our teacher set us a task to make a Poster about Kereru so it should include facts, description, what they do and stuff like that. I also made a picture in the middle so you guys know how it looks like, I also put in a special fact but I am not going to ruin it. Have a look yourself!