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Thursday, 13 June 2019

View From The Cockpit Descriptive Writing

This week our teachers put up a picture for us and we had to do a descriptive writing piece about that picture, we had a competition that who ever got the most points and will get 30 minutes free time which I didn't win, The person who won got 126 or something points. Here is my descriptive writing
   
 View From The Cockpit

“Click” The big man with glasses in size pressing colorful buttons as
colorful as bright lights. The coffee up just chilling in the corner watching
the captain/pilot flying the plane. The smell of coffee and perfume hangs
in the wind and also blinding the pilot. In the east side darkness spreads
around the sky. The white, fluffy clouds trying to hide it away.
The west side the sun shining as bright as lava and as hot as thousands
of boiling hot water getting poured on you.Image result for view from the cockpit

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