Celebrating Puanga at Ramanui 
Knowledge KA:
Hangi Master, Paul.
Comprehension CB:
Harvest means you grow plants and gather all the plant that you’ve grown and then you can eat them.
Astronomer is a person who finds out about the moon and
the stars.
Constellations means a group of stars forming.
Celebration means that you're celebrating someone's birthday.
Application AA:
I twinkle in the night sky.
I am like a light.
I am close to the sun.
I only appear in the night.
I am made out of exploding balls of gas.
At night time I show you the light so you find your way.
I am a star.
Analysing AnB
Stars
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Space
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I guide people its way at night.
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I can hold every planet in space.
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New Ideas NIC
The kids had brought blankets sleeping bags. They slept on a mattress.
Next morning the kids are wide awake to search for Puanga in the sky.
The sky was super clear that the kids could see the stars
and the moon quite well.
The kids took photos to show their parents.
After they looked at in the telescope they showed Paul the photos.
Paul said very good to the children.
When they got home they showed their parents and their parents said “Wow I’ve never seen a star and a moon that close.”
Evaluation A
I rate this text 10 out of 10 because It tells us about the stars.
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