The Greatest Showman
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Hugh the Great Showman is like a magical magician, Hugh has brownish glowy hair. He has brownish glowy eye brows.
Greatest Magician wore a darkish flaming red coat. He was holding a magical black staff. He has a shiny golden vest on with white on the top of the collar.
His teeth were shining like diamond. He felt very proud of himself.
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Hugh was standing in the middle of a bright, glowy, expensive, Ice castle with snow flakes in the stadium. The stadium had a light sparkling Hugh the Great Showman.
Paragraph 3: The first 4 performers names were Zavier, Tom, Jesse and Miguel. Zavier, Miguel and Tom were doing backflips on the stage. After the backflips Tom was holding his body very strong so Miguel could stand on Tom’s shoulders and Zavier would stand on Miguel’s shoulder. Tom had to be very strong so Miguel and Zavier wouldn’t fall.
THE SAD MOMENT:
Jesse started walking carefully on the thick strong rope so he wouldn’t fall and crack his bone. Jesse walked carefully across the thick strong rope until he got on the middle. He was about to do a backflip and land on the stadium but unfortunately the rope wasn’t stable enough so Jesse fell and broke a bone in his arm, He was screaming so hard that his pants fell off and the audience laughed but it was very sad at the same time.
WHAT HAPPENED WHEN HE FELL:
Zavier had to rush and grab his mobile and Zavier had to call the ambulance because he broke his arm. Thank god the ambulance came right away. The ambulance took him away and Zavier, Tom and Miguel got in the car and wanted to meet Jesse in the hospital.
When Zavier, Tom and Miguel got in the hospital and in Jesse’s room Jesse told Zavier, Tom and Miguel “I am not doing a performance for the rest of my life.” Miguel replied “Why not? Zavier and Tom cannot do it without you!” Jesse replied back to Miguel “Fine, I will join the show again and show my talent!”
By Aryan
Hello Aryan i really like the way you add lots of details
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