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Thursday, 4 July 2019

Can He Save Her Writing! (Spider-Man)

In Writing we all had a task to write about a story that was about Spider-Man saving a girl falling, I wrote 5 paragraphs.



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1 comment:

  1. Hi Aryan i like the way that you used paragraph and you
    did details and you used Time orders and i liked the way that you did the title By Tutoe Tuifua

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